| An addition to the 'constructive discontent'
Dear Sarah,
I would have to agree with the participants of this forum. You are only concentrating on these yachts' aesthetic value rather than their hydrodynamic characteristics. For example, you could add their underwater profiles in your designs. So far, you have only sketched one with a keel; M/Y Ephelia. Maybe if you could work on one longer with more detail, we would have a clearer picture of your vision.
Are these homework/ training assignments? They seem more suitable for graphic applications like print advertising. If so, there are design forums where you could get them 'proofread' instead of in here.
Regards,
Vr
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